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Posted: 31 August 2009 10:56 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 176 ]  
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Fantastic poem Martin. I love it! smile

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Posted: 01 September 2009 02:49 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 177 ]  
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Loved your poem Martin, very thought provoking.

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Posted: 03 September 2009 12:57 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 178 ]  
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Ok so I was bored and I thought I would write another poem. I’m not great with words if u couldn’t tell already

Leona is the most talented singer I have ever herd
Hands down no one can top her
She sings with such emotions and grace
You can’t help but stand up and praise
It’s rare that you find someone as talented as leona
Not only can she sing but she is very pretty too!
Now back to the singing which is why I love her so
Every note that she sings fills my heart with love
Ever since childhood singing was Leona’s passion
Now she is living her dream and has the greatest taste in fashion tongue laugh
Her first album Spirit was world class succsess
Now I can’t wait until Echo which will follow in it’s foopsteps smile
With that I will wish Leona all the best
Because of all people she deserves the most success

Hope it was ok

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I Love u Leona LOL ! u are the best tongue laugh

“...And they dont wanna be without Your hands. And they will not let me go, no they will not let me go…”

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Posted: 03 September 2009 11:13 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 179 ]  
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Well done Rose. Everybody has great lines here. Good work! I’m trying to write something for Leona, but my English is so rusty nowadays red face

Now she is living her dream and has the greatest taste in fashion
(You are 100% right on this one, I loved it smile)

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Posted: 04 September 2009 12:26 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 180 ]  
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dimartin - 03 September 2009 11:13 PM

Well done Rose. Everybody has great lines here. Good work! I’m trying to write something for Leona, but my English is so rusty nowadays red face

Now she is living her dream and has the greatest taste in fashion
(You are 100% right on this one, I loved it smile)

Thank you!! I am glad u like it!! Ik it’s amazing to see how much talent we have here in the forum!!! I’m sure ur poem will be amazing too smile!
And I love that line too it’s my fave part tongue laugh

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Posted: 08 September 2009 01:40 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 181 ]  
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Ok, here it goes.  It’s an acróstico (I don’t know how to call it in English). If you spot any mistake please warn me (my last English lesson took place two years ago).
I’ll go for a walk now. See u later. I hope you like it red face

Diva

Living and dreaming out loud
Essence of an angelic x factor
Over the years…getting better
Never ending dream…
An echo of perfection

Lovely voice, you call me
Enchant my spirit
Wake up my supportive side
Inspiration to my soul…
So, diva, who are you?

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Posted: 08 September 2009 01:42 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 182 ]  
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Nice 1 dude, thnx for posting it! cool smile

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Posted: 08 September 2009 01:50 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 183 ]  
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dimartin - 08 September 2009 01:40 PM

Ok, here it goes.  It’s an acróstico (I don’t know how to call it in English). If you spot any mistake please warn me (my last English lesson took place two years ago).
I’ll go for a walk now. See u later. I hope you like it red face

Diva

Living and dreaming out loud
Essence of an angelic x factor
Over the years…getting better
Never ending dream…
An echo of perfection

Lovely voice, you call me
Enchant my spirit
Wake up my supportive side
Inspiration to my soul…
So, diva, who are you?

That is just lovely.  smile

I especially like the way in which you use the album titles so cleverly. And the question at the end is one I have often asked myself about Leona. In some ways she is an enigma which is one of the reasons why she is so fascinating imo. But the whole thing is very expressive.

And English is your second language?  ohh You put me to shame.  red face

The English word for this kind of poem is very similar: acrostic.

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Posted: 08 September 2009 02:25 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 184 ]  
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I have a new poem about Leona.

Leona’s music gives me joy in my heart
And she makes me feel so proud
She is the definition of perfect
And her songs make me sing out loud

I love her new song Happy
The way she sings it is so beautiful
The passion in her voice is so amazing
That is why she is my idol

I have so much time for Leona’s music
I listen to it every day
Every time I hear her songs
I just wanna scream Wahey !

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She is a shining star
I love you Leona

Echo - Leona’s new album is amazing buy it now.
Happy is a great song - download it !!!

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Posted: 08 September 2009 02:39 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 185 ]  
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natalie21 - 08 September 2009 02:25 PM

I have a new poem about Leona.

Leona’s music gives me joy in my heart
And she makes me feel so proud
She is the definition of perfect
And her songs make me sing out loud

I love her new song Happy
The way she sings it is so beautiful
The passion in her voice is so amazing
That is why she is my idol
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I have so much time for Leona’s music
I listen to it every day
Every time I hear her songs
I just wanna scream Wahey !

More lovely sentiments.  smile

I haven’t commented on every poem because it would take for ever.  LOL

But like many forum members, I’m sure, I’ve read every single one and I have been bowled over by the amazing effect that Leona and her music have had on so many of us. In fact, it makes me quite emotional.

I don’t know if Leona has read them, but it would be great if they were all put together in a book as a kind of Good Luck with the launch of Echo present and somebody (Admin hint, hint) made sure she got them to read at her leisure.

Then she would know that whatever happens next that she really has done what she hoped and touched many hearts. grin

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Posted: 08 September 2009 03:28 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 186 ]  
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Beautiful poems DiMartin and Natalie.  I just love reading the poems and admire anyone with a gift of words.  Leona is such a lovely person, inside and out, and she has this affect on all of us.  Her voice is so exceptional and emotive and I have a definite obsession with it.  I have loved a lot of different music in my life, but nobody moves me like Leona.

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Posted: 08 September 2009 08:34 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 187 ]  
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Thanks everyone! I’m really glad you appreciated it smile

ariella 52 - 08 September 2009 02:39 PM

I don’t know if Leona has read them, but it would be great if they were all put together in a book as a kind of Good Luck with the launch of Echo present and somebody (Admin hint, hint) made sure she got them to read at her leisure.

That’s a great idea Ariella! That would be a full meaning Christmas or Bday’s gift. It’s a perfect way to show LeLe how she inspires us.
And btw you’re really nice and yes, English is my second language. smile

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Posted: 13 December 2009 06:45 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 188 ]  
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This is great! smile

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Posted: 24 January 2010 12:19 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 189 ]  
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tongue laugh wow .. love reading ur poems .. haha i almost envy all of you .. wish i hve the talent to write .. gudluck to all contestant ..

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Posted: 24 January 2010 06:31 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 190 ]  
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outta my head seems impossible
for yesterday was my happy day
moved by words echoing better in time
so please forgive me for being to brave
heres a love letter to pave the way
for whatever it takes
you make my day
bleeding love it is ,for i say
loving you is easy cause you’re beautiful

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Posted: 26 January 2010 06:06 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 191 ]  
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this is something i wrote today while at school , the lecturer was absent . LOL
the first line describes leonas early music career before the x-factor
2-4 lines describes leona triumph in the x-factor
all the others talk about her success.


Lyrics my medium, my link propeL
Endlessly till passion and desirE
Overcame all odds , tO
Not only sing but wiN
Amidst all uncertainty , connecting with fans ,A
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Lifetime goal that feeL
Ever more wonderful for everyonE
Walking and riding with the floW
In my music , cos I
Spirited within echoed to unreachable heightS

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Posted: 26 January 2010 11:32 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 192 ]  
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Hi

Somewhere over the rainbow, I heard you sing…
I had nothing but x-factor you did win
I don’t care what they say, I like to listen to you
For spirit and Echo more recognition is due

She made footprints in the sand on dancing on ice
Olympics had a whole lotta love for a girl so nice
Critics should light up light up, theres no where to Run
Leona will create a new no.1

I cant get you outta my head, Leona I got U
So don’t change, to yourself be true
Have a great tour and dance and set your spirit free
I have great expectations for album number three

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Posted: 27 January 2010 12:23 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 193 ]  
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Hi

I tried to create a nice parody of BL as a poem.. if I failed to make a nice one please delete..

closed off from a music chart
i just needed a start
bleeding love set me apart
on Oprah I sang out my heart
Before you know I was charting

But on x-factor something happened
the first time I heard you
my heart melted to the ground
found something true
no.1 in 33 charts the world around
think I am going crazy

I dont care what they say
I love a song from you
dont be put me off
but to yourself, you should be true
my hearts disappointed by the award
you keep missing
the awards let you down and you

keep creating
keep keep creating songs
keep creating
keep keep creating songs
keep creating
keep keep creating songs
you disolve my frown

trying not to hear
the critics so loud
their piercing sound fills my ears
trying to fill me with doubt
yet I know their goal is to keep you from falling

hey yeah

but Leona nothing greater
that the sounds you make
In this world of sadness
I rise up on the sound
you sing so true
I am becoming crazy

may be

I dont care what they say
I love a song from you
dont be put me off
but to yourself, you should be true
my hearts disappointed by the award
you keep missing
the awards let you down and you

keep creating
keep keep creating songs
you keep creating
keep keep creating songs
you keep creating
you keep keep creating songs
you disolve my frown

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Posted: 28 February 2010 01:07 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 194 ]  
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I hope you guys don’t mind me trying smile Im no Poem writer but Ill do my best.

I search for something, so pure and true
I found that something, I found it in you
You lift me up, and fly me high
You make me smile, you make me cry

Your voice echo’s like a beautiful bird
The most elegant voice, I’ve ever heard
I seek beauty, need look no more
A singer like you, I’ve been waiting for

You helped me through, I owe so much
Your soul echo’s, the kindest touch
Always be true, you will succeed
You’re a true winner, You’re in the lead
Thankyou Leona.

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Posted: 28 February 2010 02:03 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 195 ]  
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kingjohn - 28 February 2010 07:59 AM

XxJessicaxX your poem is very good, I think you were very modest when you said you were going to try! I like your poem, I’d say continue writing them grin

Thankyou so much kingjohn! Wow, I can’t believe someone liked my poem smile Thankyou so much!

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Posted: 28 February 2010 02:03 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 196 ]  
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kingjohn - 28 February 2010 07:59 AM

XxJessicaxX your poem is very good, I think you were very modest when you said you were going to try! I like your poem, I’d say continue writing them grin

hi

Great poem XxjessicaxX

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Posted: 11 March 2010 10:24 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 197 ]  
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It’s great to see that people are still posting poems even though the competition is over. smile

We certainly have some very talented writers on the forum.

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